Complete the next line of this story and lets see where is goes. .
Rules 1. Post one frame and wait until someone else has written the next line.
2. After this opening, every post may not be more than two or three sentences at max.
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"Seven years in these woods alone” he thought looking at the fading sun. He had left his pregnant wife the night he learnt that the child was not his.
But that did not bother him much, it was just a passing thought. All he wanted now was, to be GOD. Tired of the voices of knowledge from his own mind he closed his eyes and yelled " Stop teaching me ... Why don't I become God Finally?"
He opened his eyes, and saw her watching him without a blink....
Post by eponine1971 on Jun 28, 2005 11:45:21 GMT -5
She was tall, slender, with the fairest skin he had ever seen. Her blonde hair cascaded around her like a cloak hiding her bare body. She smiled as she approached him. She rested her hand on his cheek and opened her mouth to speak.
Post by eponine1971 on Jun 28, 2005 18:17:20 GMT -5
"Who are you?" He asked half afraid to look into her eyes. "I am your protector, your comfort, your hope.... My dear Jason, I am one of the many who watch all of you. From the moment all beings are born, they are never truly alone." "Are you God? Are you here to punish me for seeking to become one?" "No Jason. Love doesn't punish."
Post by eponine1971 on Jun 29, 2005 10:37:41 GMT -5
He knew then that he remembered her. She was there when his father left. She was there when his mother died. And she was there that fateful night when he left his wife. Always in the corners of his mind or heart, she held him when he did not have the strength to stand.
Post by richardish on Jun 29, 2005 10:52:05 GMT -5
You! He said out loud. Then he silenced himself and just began to think and feel. A broad smile emerged on his face as he thought to himself, You! But then the smile quickly disappeared as he again began to think and feel. Feel the past, all the despair as if it hit him all at once.
Last Edit: Jun 29, 2005 20:21:29 GMT -5 by richardish
Post by eponine1971 on Jun 30, 2005 21:51:59 GMT -5
He lit the one candle in the corner of the room. As she sat down next to him, he could look deeply into her eyes for the first time. They were a deep violet. He was taken back a bit as he watched her play with the flame. The heat of the fire didn't seem to affect her. "You can ask that question now."
"The one you've been thinking ever since you saw the colour of my eyes."
Post by richardish on Jun 30, 2005 22:10:46 GMT -5
As he looked at her there was a distintive aura the moved as she moved swayed as she swayed. Now! He thought , now the real answers I've been waiting so long to hear. He looked again deeper into her remarkably violet eyes and suddenly he could feel her thoughts.
What am I ? She thought. As she seemed to flicker with the candle.
Last Edit: Jun 30, 2005 22:14:08 GMT -5 by richardish
Like a timeless whisper echoing through the night, his heart began to beat again. The coldness that had followed him everywhere seemed to melt off his body. "Seven years." He thought as he reached his hand to touch hers. "For seven years I've been walking these woods alone."
"No Jason." She said as her hand touched his palm to palm, fingertip to fingertip. "For seven years you've been dead."