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Post by Grave on Jun 28, 2005 8:21:33 GMT -5
Complete the next line of this story and lets see where is goes. .
Rules 1. Post one frame and wait until someone else has written the next line.
2. After this opening, every post may not be more than two or three sentences at max.
Here we go ... ========================================
"Seven years in these woods aloneā he thought looking at the fading sun. He had left his pregnant wife the night he learnt that the child was not his.
But that did not bother him much, it was just a passing thought. All he wanted now was, to be GOD. Tired of the voices of knowledge from his own mind he closed his eyes and yelled " Stop teaching me ... Why don't I become God Finally?"
He opened his eyes, and saw her watching him without a blink....
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Post by eponine1971 on Jun 28, 2005 11:45:21 GMT -5
She was tall, slender, with the fairest skin he had ever seen. Her blonde hair cascaded around her like a cloak hiding her bare body. She smiled as she approached him. She rested her hand on his cheek and opened her mouth to speak.
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Post by richardish on Jun 28, 2005 17:06:03 GMT -5
My dear lovely man I have been with you always and have seen your toil. It is only now that we can speak.
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Post by eponine1971 on Jun 28, 2005 18:17:20 GMT -5
"Who are you?" He asked half afraid to look into her eyes. "I am your protector, your comfort, your hope.... My dear Jason, I am one of the many who watch all of you. From the moment all beings are born, they are never truly alone." "Are you God? Are you here to punish me for seeking to become one?" "No Jason. Love doesn't punish."
~~~~~Richardish, you misspelled 'now'.
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Post by Grave on Jun 29, 2005 9:51:58 GMT -5
"Love? What do you mean ? Who Are You ?" He realised he spoke for the first time in seven years.
"Is he dead ?" he thought to himself , but she smiled and said to him "No Jason, you are not ..."
She could read his mind.
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Post by richardish on Jun 29, 2005 10:14:39 GMT -5
What else is on your weary mind my friend? What other answers can I give you?
His astonished look slowly melted away
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Post by eponine1971 on Jun 29, 2005 10:37:41 GMT -5
He knew then that he remembered her. She was there when his father left. She was there when his mother died. And she was there that fateful night when he left his wife. Always in the corners of his mind or heart, she held him when he did not have the strength to stand.
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Post by richardish on Jun 29, 2005 10:52:05 GMT -5
You! He said out loud. Then he silenced himself and just began to think and feel. A broad smile emerged on his face as he thought to himself, You! But then the smile quickly disappeared as he again began to think and feel. Feel the past, all the despair as if it hit him all at once.
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Post by Grave on Jun 30, 2005 9:58:50 GMT -5
"Am I in a dream ?" he spoke inside his mind deciding to test her.
"What isn't a dream Jason? What have you learnt in seven years ?" she smiled.
He smiled back, now beggining to trust her.
"Lets go inside and talk? " he asked as he lead her towards his tree house."Be careful, hold my hand?"
"I always have" she said calmly
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Post by eponine1971 on Jun 30, 2005 21:51:59 GMT -5
He lit the one candle in the corner of the room. As she sat down next to him, he could look deeply into her eyes for the first time. They were a deep violet. He was taken back a bit as he watched her play with the flame. The heat of the fire didn't seem to affect her. "You can ask that question now."
"What question?"
"The one you've been thinking ever since you saw the colour of my eyes."
"What are you?" He asked.
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Post by richardish on Jun 30, 2005 22:10:46 GMT -5
As he looked at her there was a distintive aura the moved as she moved swayed as she swayed. Now! He thought , now the real answers I've been waiting so long to hear. He looked again deeper into her remarkably violet eyes and suddenly he could feel her thoughts.
What am I ? She thought. As she seemed to flicker with the candle.
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Post by eponine1971 on Jul 1, 2005 0:27:04 GMT -5
Like a timeless whisper echoing through the night, his heart began to beat again. The coldness that had followed him everywhere seemed to melt off his body. "Seven years." He thought as he reached his hand to touch hers. "For seven years I've been walking these woods alone."
"No Jason." She said as her hand touched his palm to palm, fingertip to fingertip. "For seven years you've been dead."
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Post by Grave on Jul 1, 2005 8:36:58 GMT -5
He did not seem to notice what she said. "Yes, only now I realize how dead I was.."
He was mesmerised by touch of her hand that now brushed his hair, gently. Never had he felt such love since his mother died, he was five then.
"You are still dead Jason, still" her eyes reflected. He could hear her now too.
"I am living now, In this dream, i am living now" Jason did not attempt to use his lips to speak.
"No Jason, from seven years you are dead indeed..." she said to him aloud
"Dead?" he looked at her without moving... he wanted an explanation to this.
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cowboy
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Post by cowboy on Jul 1, 2005 8:49:02 GMT -5
i dont know why he wanted an explaination of what she just said.
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Post by Grave on Jul 1, 2005 9:25:30 GMT -5
Jason looked around to see who said this but saw no one. "Is any one with you? " he asked to her
"No, they are with you" as she pointed at his shoulder.
He saw two tiny creatures, much like human, sitting upon his shoulder. "hi, we are elfs.. ."
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